by
Racheline Maltese
Naturally,
I have about two different lengths I write at: 3,000 words and 70,000 words.
While my co-author and I have sold pieces at both of those lengths, we’ve
learned quickly that being able to produce stories at a lot of other lengths is
also valuable, not just in terms of creating material to submit to publishers
but in terms of creating stories that can act as a gateway into our other work.
In many
ways, at 12,000 words Evergreen is
the story my co-author and I never meant to write. It’s set between the first
and second books in our LGBT romance series, and it focuses on the relationship
between secondary and tertiary characters. It’s also not a length that’s
natural for us as writers.
But part
of how Evergreen will
ultimately succeed for us has to do with writing at that length we hadn’t
previously explored. With 12,000 words we found enough room to show character
and conflict in a way that hopefully makes readers want to know more, while
also giving them a very clear HEA.
For me,
learning to write at different lengths has come from two things: My background
in journalism and my love of television. Journalism teaches me that there’s
always a simpler way to say something if I need to save a few words or
sentences. Television teaches me that story structure varies by show length. In
the U.S., a half-hour network comedy is 22 minutes when you account for
commercials. A cable comedy without commercials will often run a little longer.
A 27-minute show without a commercial break has a very different structure than
a 22-minute show with several. These stylistic differences become even more
pronounced when you look at hour-long and movie-length programming.
To write a
shorter mid-series story that would also stand alone, Erin and I quickly
realized we’d have to write a “monster of the week” episode designed to fall
between season 1 (that is, book 1) and season 2 (book 2, which is out in
January) of our series. Once we understood the story’s function and structure
in terms of the television we’d been watching our whole lives, it became much
easier to figure out what needed to be told and how. It also became easier to
understand what pieces of the story we’d have to hold back for another
occasion.
For writers who want to branch out from their natural storytelling
lengths, there is no quick answer. Like anything in writing, sometimes you just
have to hammer at it until it works. But the mental exercise of imagining your
stories (and other people’s) in different formats helps build the muscles that
can have you writing -- and selling -- at different lengths.♥
Racheline Maltese co-writes
the Love in Los Angeles LGBT romance series with Erin McRae. Set in the film
and television industry, the books Starling (September 10, 2014), Doves
(January 21, 2015), and Phoenix (June 10, 2015)) are available from Torquere
Press. Their May/December "gay for you" novella Midsummer will be
released Summer 2015 by Dreamspinner Press. You can also find their work in
Best Gay Romance 2015 edited by Felice Picano and published by Cleis Press.
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