A good
story needs a good villain. They’re the third important person in your
story—after the hero and heroine, of course. But it takes more then a sinister
grin and a traumatized past to create the right anti-hero. How do you do this?
Make them human. A good villain needs a strong character profile—give them a
past, an identity, a motivation!
The worst
thing your antagonist can be called is a ―cartoon villain‖, essentially a
caricature of pure evilness. You don’t want that. So the next time you’re
crafting your villain, remember these fine character qualities that will turn
your evildoer into the baddest bad guy your readers will love to hate.
Purpose:
What’s their
motivation? Give your villain a reason for why they kill, maim, and/or torture.
For Freddy Krueger, Hollywood’s most iconic villain, it was killing the
children of his persecutors as revenge for burning then killing him and
ulti-mately taking him away from his daughter.
Power: What’s their strength? Your
villain should be powerful in the sense that they are almost undefeatable. They
can’t be easy to beat. If any secondary character can defeat them, we wouldn’t
need the hero(ine) to fight them. Krueger’s power is his ability to kill people
in their dreams. Can’t get any more powerful then that!
Identity:
What’s their
trademark? Almost every villain has a weapon of choice or some-thing about them
that not only make our skin crawl but also makes us remember them. That
identifiable mark or object is symbiotic to who that villain is and part of
what makes them unique. Imagine a brown fedora, a red and green striped
sweater, and sharp blades for hands… it’s hard not to think of whose disfigured
face that conjures up.
Flaw: What’s their weakness? Yes, they
must have power but not too much. No one can be too strong and powerful, not
your hero(ine) and especially not your villain. Your antagonist needs to have a
defect, something that the protagonist can use to ultimately save the day.
Krueger’s Achilles’ heel? He is ―mortal‖ in the real-world. Once he leaves the
dream-world, he is rendered powerless.
Include
these core elements and you’re on your way to writing ―bad good.♥
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR: Lena Hart is author of two
novellas with Secret Cravings Publishing, including BECAUSE YOU LOVE ME. To learn more about Lena and
her work, visit www.LenaHartSite.com.
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